http://www.ibabuzz.com/outtakes/2010/05/19/where-can-i-get-a-drink-around-here/ Sun, 31 Jul 2011 08:32:47 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.5.1 http://www.ibabuzz.com/outtakes/2010/05/19/where-can-i-get-a-drink-around-here/comment-page-1/#comment-568 HeadinHands Wed, 09 Jun 2010 22:06:09 +0000 http://www.ibabuzz.com/outtakes/?p=1736#comment-568 You are quite possibly the biggest twit of a writer I’ve ever read. I quote you, “(like a pair of love handles)” -Do you edit drafts? ‘Love handles’ implies plural, that’s why the s is there. Adding the word ‘pair’ is reiterating. It is redundant. Unless you were speaking of two individuals with unflattering waistlines, it does not work. Did they solicit you on the street and hand you the job, or?

]]> http://www.ibabuzz.com/outtakes/2010/05/19/where-can-i-get-a-drink-around-here/comment-page-1/#comment-544 Al Sat, 22 May 2010 04:35:57 +0000 http://www.ibabuzz.com/outtakes/?p=1736#comment-544 You didn’t mention 2 of my favorites: Smitty’s on Grand Avenue and 19th Street Station on 19th Street.

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